You're absolutely correct in that it's written poorly, thank you for bringing it light. I have just rewritten it, albeit not following your suggestion exactly because of the dual use of the word "in". (Similar to the line in the 1970s sing "Live and Let Die": . . . this ever-changing world inwhich we live in'."
I am NOT saying that you are incorrect in using the word twice, nor am I saying that your suggestion is exactly like the lyric, I have merely chosen a different path.
Probably putting clothes on them. I have a hairless dog and sometimes I put little sweaters on him, but that's only when it's freezing out and that's the only time he likes wearing clothes. Other than freezing weather, he runs around naked as nature intended.