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Would this make a good childrens' story?

Once upon a time a bunch of people did some stuff. The end.

Posted - June 19, 2019
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  • 46117
    Horrible story but a pretty decent title for one.
      June 19, 2019 12:40 PM MDT
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  • 10026
    You were referring to the, "the end," part, weren't you?
      June 20, 2019 9:23 AM MDT
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  • 46117
    Or this take.  

    Too bad no one will be alive to read the book.  

      June 19, 2019 12:41 PM MDT
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  • 44619
    Good cover photo.
      June 19, 2019 1:12 PM MDT
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  • 17596
    No. Not for a childrens book

      June 19, 2019 11:36 PM MDT
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  • 10026
    It definitely inspires imagination.
      June 19, 2019 6:51 PM MDT
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  • 3523
    Can we spice it up a little?  What if we add, "Then a ghost came."
      June 19, 2019 9:00 PM MDT
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  • It's a children's book, you freaking perv.
      June 19, 2019 11:29 PM MDT
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  • 44619
    Thanks. I love you too.
      June 20, 2019 7:08 AM MDT
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  • I was referring to CallMeIshmael's reply, but yeah, you're a perv too.

    Maybe that's why I like you ;)
      June 20, 2019 7:12 AM MDT
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  • 44619
    I missed that. Maybe I should write an adult short story.
      June 20, 2019 7:14 AM MDT
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  • Just upload a few videos to PornHub. It takes less time and effort and people will truly appreciate your creativity there.
      June 20, 2019 7:19 AM MDT
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  • 44619
    Yeah, right...I'll get right on that.
      June 20, 2019 7:21 AM MDT
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  •   June 20, 2019 7:24 AM MDT
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  • 10026
    We must have been writing at the same time.  I totally agree!!
    Big Smiles!
      June 20, 2019 9:20 AM MDT
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  • 10026
    Now we're talkin'.  Don't revert back.  You'd have to think about de-virginizing yourself and others.  It's way too dramatic.
    Stick to people with experience.  It gives way to roads of pleasure well beyond the novice.
      June 20, 2019 9:19 AM MDT
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  • 3523
    Excuse me?  What do ghosts have to do with sexual perversion?  Oh, I see.  To you... yes, maybe so. This post was edited by CallMeIshmael at June 20, 2019 9:25 AM MDT
      June 20, 2019 7:58 AM MDT
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  • I just call it like my warped brain sees it. Don't judge.
      June 20, 2019 8:00 AM MDT
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  • 17596
    The people were very strange looking.  They were either very very short, or very very tall.  No one was in the middle.
      June 19, 2019 11:38 PM MDT
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  • 3523
    Where were you?  Or should I say, where were they?
      June 20, 2019 7:18 PM MDT
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