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Do you often speak in metaphor? If so, please give us a thumbnail sketch. (See what I did there? LOL.)

 

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Posted - December 1, 2020

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    I could make a sketch as small as a thumbnail
    or use my thumbnail to sketch in sand or clay
    but if I sent a digital photo of it
    the image you'd see would no longer be a thumbnail sketch.

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    Lotus

     

     

    My roots suck nutrients 

    from the rot in the mud.

     

    Water is my world;

    its skin, my cloak. 

    I thirst for light.

     

    When young

    my bud strove to open to the light

    but shrunk in fear  

    from the blinding bright zenith of day.

     

    My adult-self rose in the dark,

    became an open bowl of petals, 

    but again the burning noon turned me back.

     

    Now I discover my being in middle-age, 

    heady and fragrant,

    but already wilting.

     

    Perhaps you scent my aroma

    and linger a while by the lake where I bloom.

     

    And tomorrow, too soon, 
    I will be but a dried out pod.


    Soon I will rot back into the mud,

    at peace,
    no trace to remain. 

    This post was edited by inky at December 2, 2020 6:17 PM MST
      December 2, 2020 6:10 PM MST
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      December 2, 2020 8:13 PM MST
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      Completely beautiful use of metaphor throughout, it’s as if you’re the Michelangelo on the Sistine Chapel of my mind’s eye.

    :)

      December 2, 2020 8:27 PM MST
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