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I wrote this poem on Easter morning -- what does it mean to you?

The salt shaker falls to the floor

crystals disengage

a muted trumpet heralds the beginning

or is it the end?

we sit in the shade

winter had kept us warm, covering

Earth in forgetful snow

Melanie Klein invites us in for tea

we talk for an hour.

–- April 16, 2017

Posted - April 17, 2017
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  • 3907
    Hello f:

    Means you gotta clean up some salt..  Oh, I'm sure it's deeper than that, but I'm pretty shallow.

    goody
      April 17, 2017 11:08 AM MDT
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  • 1029
    Would you like to have tea with Melanie Klein?
      April 17, 2017 11:10 AM MDT
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  • 6477
    Well nice poem.. but I don't have a clue who Melanie whatsit is... I only wonder.. was it her salt pot you broke?
      April 17, 2017 11:26 AM MDT
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  • 1029
    That's the mystery !!  We talked for an hour and she never brought up the topic of the salt shaker!! This post was edited by flipper at April 17, 2017 11:51 AM MDT
      April 17, 2017 11:50 AM MDT
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  • My first thought is do not read meaning into sundry events.
      April 17, 2017 12:57 PM MDT
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  • 44226
    If it don't rhyme, it ain't a poem.
      April 17, 2017 1:18 PM MDT
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  • 10026
    Funny you should say that Element, I was wondering where the rhyme was too!! Big smiles.  Great Minds..... ;)
      April 17, 2017 10:01 PM MDT
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  • You either did too many or not enough drugs.
      April 17, 2017 8:58 PM MDT
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  • 1029
    Quite true !
      April 18, 2017 6:10 AM MDT
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  • 10026
    Hi Flipper~ You're craving a shot of tequila instead of boring tea.  If you spill the salt, don't forget to throw some over your left shoulder! :) This post was edited by Merlin at April 18, 2017 6:10 AM MDT
      April 17, 2017 9:58 PM MDT
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  • 22891
    not sure what it means
      April 19, 2017 3:26 PM MDT
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