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If you were to begin writing a horror story how would your first sentence or two start out?

Eg.. I heard those kinds of awful fearsome sounds that I never in my life would I ever want to hear again....

Posted - December 6, 2021

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  • 1340
    Is it technically correct to use the singular, however? "It wasn't two clauses"? This post was edited by Danilo_G at December 10, 2021 9:45 PM MST
      December 10, 2021 1:03 PM MST
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  • 13251
    Two clauses is plural, not singular.
      December 10, 2021 1:07 PM MST
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  • 1340
    I was taking the liberty of quoting you.
      December 10, 2021 1:10 PM MST
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  • 13251
    Gotcha. I went with singular because it was one sentence.
      December 10, 2021 1:14 PM MST
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  • 1340
    Grammar policing - it is truly not a job upon which to frown!
      December 10, 2021 1:15 PM MST
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  • 13251
    Indeed. We appreciate the support of civilians like you.
      December 10, 2021 1:18 PM MST
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  • 435
    Quick, hide behind the hanging chainsaws, he will never look there.
      December 7, 2021 4:25 PM MST
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  • 13251
    What a dumb commercial. Probably Geico's stupidest.
      December 9, 2021 7:14 PM MST
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  • 435
    Have to say I liked it. Was exaggerated but is true in teenage horror movies in the choices they make.
      December 10, 2021 3:47 PM MST
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  • 5455
    It was a bright and sunny night.  The sun had just risen in the north.  Something went wrong, very wrong.
      December 7, 2021 6:36 PM MST
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  • 13395
    Very good start! This post was edited by Kittigate at December 8, 2021 8:27 AM MST
      December 7, 2021 9:12 PM MST
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  • 2969
    If she could have seen where she would be in 35 years after taking that first drink she would not have done it.  Now 35 years later she doesn't even know where she is or where she started from. 
      December 10, 2021 4:45 PM MST
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  • 13395
    There is a good start!
      December 10, 2021 9:47 PM MST
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  • 1340
    Don't mind me - just looking through some old stuff. Where have you been, Kittigate?
      December 10, 2023 10:42 AM MST
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