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Freedom calling?

Well I've had flying dreams that I could actually fly but many times the destination I chose carefully would leave me upright in a sparse sort of burn this bidge building down type of dirty room somewhere. In some God forsaken big white thrown together in a day hopeless hell hotel. I very much recall an ugly filthy dusgusting
dilapidated and grungy and very isolated many-roomed clapboard house in a scarily lonely barren room I end up in, no one was around me. Many of all the high up rooms I saw were barren and isolation with a cold feeling attached with me and it was all soiled bad
and dingy in there. While in that isolated part of the house I remember feeling trepidation that someone unknown was around but I didn't know where and I could hear their echoing voices. I felt alone liked I was doomed in a dirty crappy isolated house like death. Nothing nice about it ominous voices trap.

Posted - August 4

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  • 23577

    I don't know about freedom but maybe.  :)

    I admit the first thing I pictured was this scene from Hitchcock's "The Birds" -- the part at 1:10 in this clip -- the birds flying.

    Then I read your complete description -- I find your writing like a moody, cool poem. Nice!



    EDIT: That is, "nice" to me to read, even though you specifically say it was not nice  :)






    This post was edited by WelbyQuentin at September 13, 2024 9:04 AM MDT
      August 4, 2024 5:59 PM MDT
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  • 2128
    The thing, is my maniacism has got to land every now and the manifestation like spreading waves determining my arty enoument. This post was edited by CosmicWunderkind at September 13, 2024 9:04 AM MDT
      September 11, 2024 11:35 AM MDT
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  • 23577
    Arty things happen to me sometimes when I least expect them.
    Thanks for a Pick, too.
      September 12, 2024 9:44 AM MDT
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  • 2128
    You be so kind to thank me. Thank you too This post was edited by CosmicWunderkind at September 13, 2024 4:04 PM MDT
      September 13, 2024 6:46 AM MDT
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  • 1500
    Welby’s right—it’s quite the poetry, Bukowski-wise. I’ve been thinking about different ideas of freedom lately… In the end, it seems we’re always going to be restricted by others and therefore need to be free from ourselves.
      September 13, 2024 9:12 AM MDT
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  • 2128
    It's the inimitable emotional pulling the water of passions in our brains with its tides the ocean makes 
      September 13, 2024 2:20 PM MDT
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