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And to respond to its comments also. Thank you very, very much; you’d just initiated more revenue for me, and I dee deeply appreciate it with every fiber of my being.
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Editing it brought in even a little more revenue, as does this response. This whole deal just keeps getting better and better.
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How about 5%, yuo?
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You absolutely insist on making sure I get more money, isn’t that right? (There’s a slight uptick paid for italicized words.)
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Ah, so you’re flirting with me once again. Good to know, VERY good to know.
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(county County, California.)
Failure to capitalize the proper name of a place, and failure to use comma as appropriate and required.