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Poetry is art. Can you think of some good two line poetry stuff?

Eg:
Sweet stuff 
Is neat stuff! 

Posted - January 10, 2020
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  • 8214
    Roses are red
    Lettuce is green
      January 10, 2020 10:18 AM MST
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  • 10026
    It might take some time
    To produce you a rhyme

    Writing with stanza
    it's like writing with bonanza


      January 10, 2020 10:20 AM MST
    5

  • 64
    A two line verse thats quite hard.
    Like using toilet paper made of card.
      January 10, 2020 10:59 AM MST
    3

  • 6988
    'And from the trash can's swarming flies, jumps down The Cat, he has nine lives!'                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 'As legend would tell us, in early spring night, an angel of pity brought Earthbound her flight,'                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  'Strange music here, from nature's hand, -no repeating melody, but oh, how wonderful, just to know, Heaven sent a song for me!'                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            ( These lines are from full poems written by me.)
      January 10, 2020 11:37 AM MST
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  • 13395
    Very good!
      January 10, 2020 12:29 PM MST
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  • 10026
    Indeed! :) :)
      January 10, 2020 10:53 PM MST
    1

  • 10026
    Maybe, if you would allow, such a bold gesture
    we might make a tune from your chosen treasures


    Fulfilling, The Cat, with a tenth life, not clamered with pesky flies and rats
    But rather, praising his knowledge, filled with prestige and aristocrats
    A purring of subtle sounds without repeating monotony
    One that is sultry and tells a wonderful story

    I love your post, bhwilson

      Very creative you are
    With your talent you will go far!

    This post was edited by Merlin at January 16, 2020 1:29 PM MST
      January 10, 2020 11:14 PM MST
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  • 6988
    Thank you for your comments. However, I did receive a second place award for 'song lyrics' in a contest judged by country star and Grammy Award winner Aaron Tippin. That was cool. I have not written any poems or lyrics since 1993. 
      January 16, 2020 1:43 PM MST
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  • 2836
    Tears shall not spill for those... that scamper gleefully amok
    When those who are suffering... experience nary a f*ck
      January 10, 2020 1:38 PM MST
    3

  • See the water.

    Be the water.
      January 10, 2020 2:38 PM MST
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  • 10026
    I totally get this
    With water you cannot miss!

    Happy! Happy!
    There is no poem to that
    It is simply a fact!
    ;) ;)
      January 10, 2020 11:17 PM MST
    4

  • 10993
    Candy is dandy,

    But liquor is quicker.
      January 10, 2020 5:04 PM MST
    6

  • 10026
    There are no words to express 
    how much I admire your wisdom and know this is why you have success

    I know that is totally wrong
    Not in the thought but soon-to-be song

    It's the punctuation
    I already see the door to detention This post was edited by Merlin at January 16, 2020 4:09 PM MST
      January 10, 2020 11:20 PM MST
    3

  • 46117
    There was an old man from Nantucket

    I can't think of more so go fk it.
      January 10, 2020 11:34 PM MST
    5


  • You are like a crayon.
    You colour my world.
      January 16, 2020 2:22 PM MST
    3

  • 47
     Don't say ain't or your mother will faint
    Your father will step in a can of paint This post was edited by Beans - The Silent Generation at January 16, 2020 5:19 PM MST
      January 16, 2020 4:08 PM MST
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  • 16762
    I can't top Lennon:

    "And in the end, the love you take
    Is equal to the love you make"
    - The Beatles, The End
      January 16, 2020 5:45 PM MST
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