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WHAT is WRONG with YOU????

Posted - August 25, 2019

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  • 4624
    Heaps of things.
    Give me a few days and I'll write the essay.
      August 25, 2019 1:52 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    I am SURE you could write an essay in 20 minutes.  I can. What makes us different is you could write a WHOLE TOME in 2 days.  And it would be impeccable and readable.  

    Big difference.
      August 25, 2019 1:53 PM MDT
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  • 4624
    I'm laughing :D LOL.
    Very sweet of you to say it.
    Could mean I'm on track in learning how to write.
    I've got another project on at present - preparing to recite in the Nimbin Performance Poetry World Cup in two weeks time..
    Needs to be my own original work
    I've got a suite of poems which would do as a fallback.
    But I want to write something specially for it - something completely different to what slam poetry normally sounds like - is.
    Something that contains all the qualities of classical poetry,
    but which is simple, easy to understand, mesmerising, enjoyable and addresses some aspect of an important issue.
    I'm spending so many hours on it - research and trial runs - that I'm about ready to collapse in a fugue.

    I'll get to the flaws essay... eventually - probably post it as a blog.

    In the meantime, dear friend Sharonna, wish me luck.

    xxooxx
      August 25, 2019 9:56 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    If you don't win SOME mention I will be FLOORED.  I cannot imagine a better poem.  Maybe ones as good (rare) but not better.

    I am a fan and I didn't even read it yet.  I know what you can do.  
      August 25, 2019 10:28 PM MDT
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  • 4624
    Giggling out loud again.
    That's the perfect medicine.
    Thank you, Sharonna.
    Chances are, I might get through two or three of the initial heats.
    Don't know if I'll make it into the finals.
    The top third are poets who've been writing for thirty years or more, very experienced in wordcraft and slam technique.
    The longest poem I've memorised was Shakespeares sonnet 116 -
    which would take only a couple of minutes delivered with a savoury slowness.
    Eight minutes for the Cup is, to me, a huge feat. Just holding someone's attention with speech for 45 seconds is a near miracle in this age of distractions.
    So I'm treating it as part of my education.
    I won't matter if I don't win or place
    (though, to be honest, the $2,000 would be nice.)

    What will matter will be being part of it, enjoying the poetry of some great wordsmiths,
    and learning.
    Thanks for the vote of confidence! :)
    (I wish I could rig the audience with clones of you. ;)  )
      August 25, 2019 10:47 PM MDT
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  • 11313
    I have Opera Singer Syndrome and it causes me to stand around and say - me me me meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Cheers!! 
      August 25, 2019 2:01 PM MDT
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  • 13395
    I find more money on the ground than I make buying lottery tickets. Oh yeah -and I think your president is a great wonderful man.  This post was edited by Kittigate at August 25, 2019 6:47 PM MDT
      August 25, 2019 3:26 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    Me too. Why do you mention it? 
      August 25, 2019 6:48 PM MDT
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  • 13395
    When you are done with him send him here so he can make Canada great again.  MCGA! 
      August 25, 2019 6:56 PM MDT
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  • 4624
    Haha! LOL! :D
      August 25, 2019 9:57 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    Send him there?  

    Fatso doesn't go anywhere because someone ELSE requests it.  He needs to know he is NOT wanted first.  Then he can BARGE his fat lard a$$ onto the biggest STAGE Canada can erect.  HUUGE.  Big crowds and tons of admirers.  Can you swing that?  Because if you are America, you cannot, and Trump is forced to pay people to show up or they won't get their overtime.


      August 25, 2019 10:32 PM MDT
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  • 14795
    I am seriously effected by or with Cute'itis.    There is no know cure I've been told...I will have to live with this disabilitating condition for the rest of my life...:(
      August 25, 2019 3:33 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    See my reply to Twinkie
      August 25, 2019 6:48 PM MDT
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  • Isn't it obvious?


      August 25, 2019 5:37 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    That's too flat to be Nice Jugs.  
      August 25, 2019 6:47 PM MDT
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  • 4624
    Hmm ...
    I bet there's something exquisitely delicious about knowing you're compellingly attractive,
    and being male and gay,
    and free to express all of it,
    and knowing you'll have your pick of any gorgeous man whose heart and mind take your fancy.

    It leaves us hets for dead.
      August 25, 2019 10:00 PM MDT
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  • 8239
    Plenty, however I am always working to improve. 
      August 25, 2019 5:55 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    Stop working to improve. That is what is wrong with you.  (kidding)
      August 25, 2019 6:48 PM MDT
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  • 53606


    Please. Nothing, my dear. Absolutely nothing. 

    ~
      August 25, 2019 6:13 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    Well, if there is nothing wrong with you....

    Why do you look different every time you post yourself.  Are you a shape-shifter?  Those people are plenty WRONG.  



     This post was edited by WM BARR . =ABSOLUTE TRASH at August 26, 2019 4:29 AM MDT
      August 25, 2019 6:22 PM MDT
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  • 53606
    LOL, good point.



      August 25, 2019 6:29 PM MDT
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  • 44722
    Why do you always post men better looking than me?

      August 25, 2019 6:44 PM MDT
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  • 46117
    Hockey fan?  
      August 25, 2019 6:45 PM MDT
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  • 4624
    He's got a strong case of sexual confidence.
    Men Like that never forget the deeply ingrained experiences of being desirable and loved -
    even as they age, the aura of confidence flies about them like one of Isadora Duncans's scarves around her neck.
    He's old enough to have chronic wilt, but he's a marathon runner who keeps himself in good shape -
    so he probably has good reason to see himself as still having the X-factor.

    The rest of us can only mourn.

    A poem by Robert Graves:
    Love without hope, as when the young bird-catcher
    Swept off his tall hat to the Squire's own daughter,
    So let the imprisoned larks escape and fly
    Singing about her head, as she rode by. 
      August 25, 2019 10:06 PM MDT
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