Discussion»Questions»Communication» Grammar gurus; which is correct, 'it would be better if Karen were assessed by an external organisation' or *was* assessed by an external..
That's exactly what I thought.. I was sent that by the HR dept and although I am no grammar nut - I was a little peeved to have received a report choc full of grammar errors.
lol wimps, wusses... c'mon guys - rise, (so to speak) to the challenge.. I want to correct my HR dept and it would look seriously rubbish if I correct them and *I've* got it wrong! I've been corrected a time or three on here for my grammar, the least this forum can do is help me correct others :P
And if you had chosen to use active rather than passive voice, would you have said "You know whom would correct this" or "You know who will correct this"?
Difficult to speak of 'correct' here; as so often, it's a matter of taste.
"Were" would in this case express the subjunctive mood (more clearly conveyed in Romance languages, e.g. Spanish), which entails such nuances as emotion, hypothesis, or incertitude. If we were to assume that the writer knew what they were doing, their choice of "was" may value directness and conviction over discretion and politeness.
Technically it is correct though generally ill-advised (so I do agree with Welby and you); I don't care much provided I be convinced that the other know (more subjunctives there) the distinction.
This post was edited by Danilo_G at June 15, 2018 4:55 PM MDT
In this case, the use (not "the expression of") of the subjunctive mood is required:
The mood of the verb "to be" when you use the phrase "I were" is called the subjunctive mood, and you use it when you're talking about something that isn't true or you're being wishful.
(If) the part that follows the subjunctive verb contains a word such as "would" or "could." I would declare a holiday. We could reach the cat. Those wishful words are also a clue that you may need the subjunctive mood.
If I were you, I would select "were". (Actually, now that I think about it, it's more accurate for me to answer that if you were me, you would select "were", lol.)